Woman Reading

Comic - Woman Reading

Author Commentary

I struggled with a couple of things here...specifically what style to adopt for the dialog (I debated "Renaissance English" and "bad movie Renaissance English" but ultimately went with "minor hint at Renaissance English but mostly modern speech") and whether to give the off-screen second character her final line, worrying it was out of character (as much as one can establish a character in two panels.)  I made the first choice because I felt it served the story better, though I still worry it may make the scene awkward for some, and I made the second choice because I liked giving Lady Offscreen a snarky way to take one more shot at making her point before the final punch.  The choices are made, the ink is dry, and it's canon in the PartiallyClips Universe now.

MRS. SHOEBOX'S ASSESSMENT OF TODAY'S STRIP: *laughing* That's stupid!

 

See you next week!

-=ShoEboX=-
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Woman Reading

Brass Orchid
11/19/2014 10:55 am
Corset-Popping Mommy Sacks... That has to be a song title.

Dave Dell
11/19/2014 02:18 pm
Ridicule Kim Kardashian all you want but she has brought a corset popping "renaissance women shape" back into style and I, for one, applaud that it happened while I'm still young enough to appreciate it.

11/19/2014 07:57 pm
It's weird just how fun it is coming up with new original terms for front lumps

AndrewS
11/19/2014 10:14 pm
Brass Orchid: Forget a song title, that sounds like a hell of a name for a band!

11/21/2014 02:34 am
Both of the final punchlines: fabulous.

11/24/2014 05:34 pm
I feel like this clip has been used.